[A sealed letter for Azim al-Rashid]

[cmenden]

Dear Azim al-Rashid,

I read your ongoing work, "The Effect of The Celestial Disc-Force on the Aspects and Elements of the World", and was thoroughly unimpressed. While I appreciate your attempt to explore the influence of moonlight on celestial magic, your work lacks the depth and detail required to make it truly noteworthy.

Your writing is unconvincing and thoroughly laden with arguments both thin and unsupported. I expected a work of great scholarship from one who claims to be drawing upon the latest research, but all I found was a trite and uninspired treatise.

Rather than wasting time speculating on the nature of sand, I suggest you dive deeper into the mysteries of celestial bodies and their measurable and testable effects on the aspects and elements of the world. As it stands, you are merely presenting half-baked ideas that need more time in the oven. Like the khubz sold in the souk, it is better overcooked than undercooked.

Now if you will excuse this letter's abrupt ending, it is nearly time for me to eat my lunch. It is my hope that you think on my words.

Regards,
Estellise Azimi

[Dremen]

Live and drink Estellise Azimi,

While I appreciate your time to read through my ongoing studies and take the effort to send me a letter with your review of it..

I don't know your name, or your works, or by what credit you have to discuss the topics I bring forward in my own works.
If you would prefer to sit down and talk about the ideas I have presented, and how I may better pursue my research I would be interested.

Otherwise, this will be the last reply I give the effort to send you.

Most humble regards,
Azim al-Rashid