Legate,
Leaving aside the Voiceless distinctions you've already made clear your intent to change:
--The 'exemptions' for voluntary sport in the Assault and Murder should be removed, as they are ripe for abuse.
--Minor treason has been mostly used as an excuse for Legates to punish those they dislike. Highly subjective and likely to provoke more dissent between the Accord than there needs to be.
--Narcotics should remove the mention of mizzar, given its prevalence and use in our citadel.
Lt. R. Colmes