A World Trouble-Free

This world could be so trouble-free If we keep rules easy to see We all would be healthy and smart If we listen to wisdom with our heart But we must be taught to freely give To share this world in which we live listen to words from those who know Or we will sink far too low We need to return to the golden rule These are things that we should learn in school

There could be so much done today If people wouldn’t go astray And use their money with good sense To build a bridge and not a fence To use their time and give it freely For those of us who are most needy To live with hope and not in fear And keep your loved ones very near If all of us could only see The world could be so trouble free

Yes, I wrote this myself.

Yep, you were the kind of kid I was stuffin' in lockers. >.>

And then bragged about it to your buddies in the showers, whilst simultaneously snapping each other's jockstraps and placing hand to pert buttocks?

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That poem sucked!

I think that it's heartfelt and just a little quaint. Thanks for sharing.

Dr Dragon That poem sucked!

A.) Write something you think is better, it is easy to flame someone else's work. B.) He had the guts to post it, do you? c.) Think before you act.

Let's see more Thomas!

This poem has my stamp of approval! Kudos to you Thom!

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Dr Dragon That poem sucked!

A.) Write something you think is better, it is easy to flame someone else's work. B.) He had the guts to post it, do you? c.) Think before you act.

Let's see more Thomas!

I HAVE THE GUTS TO POST IT!

A World Trouble-Free

This world could be so trouble-free If we keep rules easy to see We all would be healthy and smart If we listen to wisdom with our heart But we must be taught to freely give To share this world in which we live listen to words from those who know Or we will sink far too low We need to return to the golden rule These are things that we should learn in school

There could be so much done today If people wouldn’t go astray And use their money with good sense To build a bridge and not a fence To use their time and give it freely For those of us who are most needy To live with hope and not in fear And keep your loved ones very near If all of us could only see The world could be so trouble free

Yes, I wrote this myself.

Was that meant to be a joke, Dr D? If so, I don't get it.

Kudos as well, Thomas.

The off-topic forums are being restored to the balance. Perhaps that's why you chose to put the poem in green? Regardless, thank you Thomas.

Then, kitterlings and kittenettes, I suggest the most noble of duels.

THE FREESTYLE RAP-OFF.

I like it, Thomas.

Please show a little more care in all your future posts, please.

I really do like it. :wink:

[edit] Dr. Dragon needs to learn the old saying: "Those in glass houses shouldn't throw stones."

Also, keep it up Thomas! I truly enjoyed it. I really, really did.

Glad you enjoyed it :lol:

And Dr.D, can you tell me why it sucked? Contructive critism would be nice.

Why? Why? Why? Be more constructive with your feedback!

Halfbrood Why? Why? Why? Be more constructive with your feedback!

Please. Is it because I rap about reality, like me and my grandma having a cup of tea? There ain't no party like my grandma's tea party. Hi- ho