Mr. Szul,

I have finished my essay on the creation of heroes, and left it at the library. Please, find me after reading it. I am eager to hear your thoughts on the matter.

-Aziel Rosis

*letter received*

Aziel,

I have read through your natural philosophy once thus far. On this first reading I have in mind just one small (but important) editing suggestion: I'd recommend that you delineate between Alexander Ubel the Founder and Father of Albert Ubel the Councillor; Albert who was the pivotal 'heroic' focus of the Ubel Rebellion. Just make it clear if you mean Albert Ubel the Councillor, or Alexander Ubel the Founder. I'm fairly sure you mean Albert, if I have read the Ubel Quartet in the Bookshop correctly.

I will need to read your text again to grasp some of the deeper implications for Upper and Lower that you intend with the work. Once again, your work has been marked in the Library Catalogue for general public reference. If you can re-edit the copy of the text you submitted without destroying it, please do so.

We shall talk again soon,

Take care,

Kepler Szul

Mr. Szul,

I thank you for telling me this. In looking over my draft of the work, I found that you are right, and in my haste to complete the essay, forgot to name the hero. I shall submit an edited copy.

-Aziel Rosis