Fawkes,

May I take the time to congratulate you on your worthy skills as a designer. I have thoroughly looked over the designs that you produced and have chosen a final version. However, superior powers would ask for several changes as listed below:

- A Darker red be used; the dye used is extremely bright.

- Less metal to be used in the final version; although metal is plausable, we ask only to keep the amount of metal to a minimum. Buttons, knuckle protectors etc. are perfectly feasable, however, due to costs entire leggings or gauntlets would be unweildy.

I hope this feedback is welcomed. I will return the designs to you at a later date.

Yours respectfully,

Associate Lathain, Private; Second Class.